Friday, August 22, 2008

An Untitled Story -- Chapter 1

Hey! It's SUGAR! I'm so sory I haven't been here for months! But, I have decided to start posting story chapters along with things that go on in my life, memes, wordless wednsday, and other things like that. Now, I havn't decided on a title, but I have decided on what's going on in the story. And, if you have any ideas, feel free to tell me in the coments. Who knows? YOU could be featured RIGHT HERE!

CHAPTER ONE

Moving on with the local news, Waterfall Estates has had about fifty kidnappings in the past two weeks! Nobody knows why they have been going on, but we have evidence that a man with black hair and who wears a leather jacket has stolen three children from one of the households near the front of the neighborhood.

Luna's mom flicked off the TV.

"Luna, I'm going out to my high shcool reunion. I couldn't find you a baby sitter, so I'm counting on you to take care of Stella and Comet," She said.

Luna rolled her eyes. "Mom, I'm eleven. I can take care of a pair of eight-year-olds. I don't need a baby-sitter."

"I know, but don't watch TV, and stick together. You got that sweetie?" she asked, planting a kiss on Luna's forehead.

"Yah, now LEAVE!" said Luna, jokingly.

After her mom left the house, Luna called her brother and sister's names.

"Stella! Comet! Come here!"

In responce, one boy and one girl came scampering down the hall. Luna explaned how they had to stay together, and not watch TV.

"Does mom think that the leather jacket guy from the news will come get us if we make too much noise?" asked her little brother, Comet.

Luna just rolled her eyes. "Let's just go play a board game till mom gets back."

How did you like it? Who is that guy on the news? Do Luna, Stella, and Comet live in Waterfall Estates? Why do their names all sound like pet's? Stay tuned to find out!

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2 comments:

silversong said...

asum!

squirtle said...

the dreaded cliffie has struck again! i hates them! but good story.